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facing death
isnt so bad
for i think it is great
to be able to end
our seemingly everlasting lives
would it be so great if
you were to live forever
and see you loved ones die?
one by one?
youd be very alone
so i think that
death isnt an enemy
it is neither our friends
its just
something in our life
that makes us want to live
- by AJ_Bored4Lyfe |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/07/2009 |
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- Title: facing death
- Artist: AJ_Bored4Lyfe
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lalala
im bored so im making up a poem
just to remind you
im out of words XD - Date: 10/07/2009
- Tags: facing death
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- comfortofstrangers - 10/13/2009
- Honestly, I really like the concept, and the message you are trying to convey. (: But, some constructive criticism; maybe not so bluntly putting what you're saying out there. Symbolism and conveying messages through other means is the very art of poetry. Robert Frost uses this a lot; like how he took "the road less taken", in the sense that he lived his life the way most people didn't. But otherwise, you have potential. (:
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