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STARE
When you stand and stare I am grateful you are there,
But to whom I am not quite sure and really do not care
For just to have you here is enough to make it clear
That when I hold you my hold on you is dear
For to me it’s like a climber’s mountain top,
A preacher’s sermon or a victim’s cop,
For to me it’s a thing I always will have wished,
A thing I strove to have perfectly accomplished
And a thing I never would stop even if I could
Since that we have is more to me than having more
Of even that we want now more than we should
For my life is worth its living now more than before
And I will love you but only till you’re leaving
And then I’ll love you more even though I’m grieving.

- Title: STARE
- Artist: UC Poika
- Description: A love poem or sorts
- Date: 09/24/2009
- Tags: stare love
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Comments (2 Comments)
- F a t a l D e c o d e - 09/28/2009
- This is great! I think the rhythm of the second line is a little off, but the message is very clear. I LOVE that last line though! You're very descriptive.
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- critic-the-homeless - 09/24/2009
- wow.. ur a great writer
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