Poem For You

• Artist: wofly_blake
• Description: This is for someone I once loved and up till recently thought i still did.
• Date: 08/28/2009
• Tags: poem

I wrote a poem for you
but I destroyed
It was pretty
It flowed
It talked about loving you
Missing you
I was going to put up
Right were this one is
But I looked over and
Saw my sleeping baby
I relized that I dont
Miss you
or love you
Not like I did
I relised hes all I need
All Ill ever want
Even if my mind lingers
Or my eyes wonder
I know I could never
Do anything to hurt him.

Comments

[VaLE3rIa]

You put your heart and soul to put it and i agree with bassmaster_awesome - it does need to be proof read. In the future watch out for lines and random things you put in there but it is really good don't give up take your baby steps and start growing into it all in all it is good (: 3/5

[bassmaster_awesome]

your heart is there, and it is good. On the other hand it needs proof reading and a set point to get across, other wise it is like a body without a spine.Yet, i accept it being a personal reflection for your future thoughts, so don't take this too seriously.