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Nodody's nice
cut yourself once
Nobody's nice
cut yourself twice
Nobody's nice
Cut yourself thrice
Somebody's nice
Cut yourself no more.
- by MermaidMoose |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 08/23/2009 |
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- Title: Nice
- Artist: MermaidMoose
- Description: I'm just having a random poetry writing streak!
- Date: 08/23/2009
- Tags: nice poetry
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Comments (5 Comments)
- MermaidMoose - 09/05/2009
- Thank you red_ribbon22-,your right,I could have done some more thinknig about the poem,and I thankyou for giving me those tips. smile
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- red_ribbon22 - 08/31/2009
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I like the basic idea of this "No one is nice cut your self once."
but as the poem went on I think you could have done a lot more with this.
Like continue with the "nobody's nice." thing if you want but changed what the person did to one's self,or you could have changed what made him/her cut in the first place everytime but kept the "cut yourself."
regardless,the idea,I think was thought out nicely,and you did a fine job. I just wish you did more with it.
^^; 4/5 Vote on mine,yeah? - Report As Spam
- MermaidMoose - 08/31/2009
- How is it fail? sad ? It's just a poem,and I don't really cut my selfor anything.
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- SilvertongueSagittarius - 08/30/2009
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- Becca_dactyl - 08/29/2009
- lol
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