I Am

• Artist: BeaDa Lesbian
• Description: A poem i wrote when i was 14.
  This is a way that i document the things that happen in my life...this particullar poem was hard for me to say cuz i had to write it for a group therapy thingy and i had to read it out louder to a bunch of people i hardly knew...Tell me what you think
• Date: 08/11/2009
• Tags: poem wrote

I am only 14 and sad.
I wonder how old i will live to be.
I hear my heart beat in a large crowd.
I see death everywhere i go.
I want to own my own heart.
I am only 14 and sad.

I pretend to know a lot.
I feel microscopic, yet on top.
I touch others with my heart.
I worry about how i look to others.
I cry about my living situation.
I am only 14 and sad.

I understand everyones point of view.
I say I'm fine when i'm not.
I dream of having no problems or worries.
I try to be myself.
I hope to get over my grandpa's suicide.
I am only 14 and sad

Comments

[xForgotten_Dreamerx]

I love this poem
BTW,if you add me,I'll always update my poetry in my journal,so you can add me and come and read it
And in this arena,search my name and you'll see all six poem written by me.
so please rate and leave comments

35/100

Sorry,for the low points,but i think u need more descritive words in it biggrin
other then that...good work

[Mary sotelo]

i am so sorry for what you have been through
hope you feel better