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Your eyes
What color are they?
Are they coal black?
Are they chocolate brown?
Because everytime I look in your eyes
All I see is
Lies
- Title: Eyes
- Artist: lexi24_4
- Description: I wrote it because of someone I fell for turned out to be a liar
- Date: 08/10/2009
- Tags: eyes
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Kishin_Mistress - 11/25/2013
- i agree with ichigo ^^ its a really short poem, so i wasnt expecting much, but then i saw you had conveyed alot in in that small bit! 5 stars for sure!
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- Ichigo kuroku - 07/29/2010
- WOW!! that was so deep and you are able to convey everything you wanted to say in so few words! i really think that you have a talent to write poems and i can't wait to read more! smile
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