Poor Sister Kanura

• Artist: my - g a l a x y
• Description: This is based on a story of mine.
  Kanura is fading and Kai is the only one for her.
  So she takes him to her magic land.
  But only in his dreams.
  So when he awakes she is a distant memory.
  She fades into ashes and slowly drifts away.
  
  Yes in my story/manga Kai is 13 and Kanura is 6.
  And Kai is a cutie :3
  Kanura looks chibi lol.!!!!!!!
  
  oh btw
  ZERO!
  
  D: sadness
• Date: 08/07/2009
• Tags: poor sister kanura

One night while I was sleeping
The angel was awake
She stumbled to my door
And whispered come with me

I found myself wondering
Through a world of make believe
I could not understand
If she had all of this
Why she only wanted me

Her eyes spoke so clearly
Though her smile no emotion
That her life was so empty
Without someone to hold her

I felt that I would cry
But she begged that I would smile
For this was her last night
That she would live as a child

I was so confused
But she quickly grabbed my hand
And took me to the garden
Of darkness and quicksand

She felt so very weary
And had one last request
That only I would visit her
In the land of distress

I cannot even tell you
How mixed up those words were
But then I understood
As her body began to stir

Those pretty blue eyes
And that blank smile
Shifted in the wind
Into particles of time

Then I began to cry
For she was my only friend
But then I awoke
At my house
Cozy in bed

Comments

[vv7722]

It doesn't make alot of sense to me, but that's kind of the point of a poem? =p
Excellent job. It's sad. Love it 5/5