I Wish You'd Believe

• Artist: -x-Nivera_Mist-x-
• Description: I thought of this song/poem one night when I felt depressed because I would never see the guy I had a HUGE crush on again. I've tried singing this, and some of it goes to the beat of "Goodnight and Goodbye" by the Jonas Brothers, although which parts I can't remember right now.
  
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• Date: 08/01/2009
• Tags: wish youd believe

You’d be surprised
When I look in your eyes
I see myself as your friend
But that is it

If only you knew how I felt
My feelings would have you melt
They’re raging inside me
Waiting to be free

If only you knew
What I think of you
You wouldn’t believe me
You’d think it wasn’t true
I’m trying to trick you
I’m trying to make you a fool
I wish you’d believe

I walk past you
And look away
I start to run
I just couldn’t stay
You know I like you

I’m walking down this road again
Wishing you’d at least be my friend
But then my heart breaks
And I am ignored again

If only you knew
What I think of you
You wouldn’t believe me
You’d think it wasn’t true
I’m trying to trick you
I’m trying to make you a fool
I wish you’d believe

My pillow dries
But not my eyes
They shine in the light
Blocking all the delight
I’m going insane

I burn away my memory
But the ashes, they won’t leave
Can’t be blown away
'Cause they are here to stay

If only you knew
What I think of you
You wouldn’t believe me
You’d think it wasn’t true
I’m trying to trick you
I’m trying to make you a fool
I wish you’d believe

Now tell me that I’m good enough
Say again as I burn your stuff
We’ll see who’s stronger

My eyes dry and let in light
I am given a brand new sight
And now I hate you

If only you knew
What I think of you, now
You wouldn’t believe me
You thought it wasn’t true
No, I’m not tricking you
Now you made yourself a fool
I wish you’d believe

I wish you’d believe
That I won’t miss you

Comments

[xXI_O R I O N_IXx]

Very appealing.
This is indeed depressing, and I know no other that could relate to what you have felt.
Even though I am not a fan of the Brothers Jonas,
This is a well written lyrical piece you have created, and this is out of friendship and the professionalism I have.
This is just more than 5 out of 5, but I wish I could rate higher than that.