pieces of ash

• Artist: XWEET14
• Description: a poem -.- read it -.-
• Date: 07/31/2009
• Tags: pieces fire death gothic

My closest of friends,
My most hated of enemies,
And to the people..
I do not know.
. . .
I am here to stay!
I am here to destroy,
Those with the right to deny
Their most pitiful demise...
. . .
As the death of me,
Coming from the sound
Of a speeding bullet rocketing towards me..
I collapse.
. . .
"To WHOM do I have the pleasure?"
Said a peculiar voice,
"SURELY you have a name."
And as I turn....
. . .
The life of the devil
Defidently has it's costs.
But then again,
maybe not..
. . .
I was walking within the
Snowy winter plains,
Seeking out the next of kills.
Returning those from which they came..
. . .
Not to destroy those with a heart,
I steady my blade,
Waiting for the next move...
The next moment..
The next death defying trick.
. . . ASHES...
And within those flames,
A figure, of eternal darkness..
"Absolutely the best thing you can do??"
. . .ASHES...
Blood decreasing from my veins,
Color scaling away from my body,
I stood in that very fire,
Staked within my own trap,
Skewered.... By Death.
.
.
.
...ashes...

Comments

[Ammiel Azarel]

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[xX_RaWr i iz TiGeR_Xx]

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[Smol Pixel IV]

i like it hun, its great & all, but you should have kept it two one font. With all these fonts, it was messy. Still 4/5

[niqusaur]

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[o0OKatO0o]

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[I-hit-you-in-your-face]

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[xxP0IS0N-R0S3xx]

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