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the heart races
things start slowing down
controlled by a spirit of the wind
a playful, frisky nature
avoiding the obvious
trying to stay free
rushing past it
as many times as it takes
to forget it
and let go
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- | Submitted on 07/30/2009 |
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- Title: Air
- Artist: conflicting actor
- Description: how it feels when you try to spare using the wind against your opponent, it wasn't fighting the opponent after awhile
- Date: 07/30/2009
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Ambiguity Machine - 02/07/2011
- i like it a lot, though i'm not sure if you meant against the wind in a figh literally, but i love this so much because you said it flat out
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- BatzLove - 08/08/2009
- i do deserve a break every now and then. i really liked it.
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- conflicting actor - 08/07/2009
- Never let myself get a brake I don't deserve
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- BatzLove - 07/31/2009
- 1000/5. ^^ u did good. dont worry. its really nice. ^^
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- conflicting actor - 07/30/2009
- traditionally I give my self a 1 before anyone else sees it. I thank every one that makes it raise above a three with every other poem.
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