invisible

• Artist: Arc En Licorne
• Description: its really just bout life so i hope u enjoy im not really that good at poetry so please message me!
• Date: 07/26/2009
• Tags: invisible

you feel so much pain yet you hold it all in
you don't know if you take it any more
every ones mean they snicker & they sneer yet you don't shed a single tear
you act real tough w/ that big hard shell but your core is melting away
you've got nothing on the inside
nothing to lose so you decide to get it done & over w/ & you end it
no more tears no more fuss
its all over now yet you find that you still linger
no after life for you
you watch all the cruel people go on w/ their lives
no one notices because nothing has changed
even though you're dead you're invisible all the same

Comments

[Alexander Six]

Thats so true great job

[Ximena Dimmet]

cool little sis

[ThisIsMyDeathbed_x]

you're very girfted with words and show true potental to become the best xd (you will, however, have to beat me .... JOKING. )
Work a little on your layout grammer and style, and you'll be awesome. smile

[Redrum-042]

wow just wow i ikes this

[phresh_swagga15]

Romantic n rymey!Lol.5/5

[Alpha-Wolf-Madyrn]

thats pretty good