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“You’re not exceedingly beautiful,” he said while circling the girl.
“Beauty is in the eyes of the beholder,” she replied with a grin.
“You’re not brilliant,” he continued without stopping.
“Don’t judge a book by it cover,” She grabbed his shoulders and looked at his face.
“You’re different,” he looked right back at her and sighed.
“So are you,” the girl just smiled and took his face in her hands and brought his face closer to hers, “Two peas in a pod…”
- by Redofcolor |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/25/2009 |
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- Title: Your Different
- Artist: Redofcolor
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Description:
A short thing I wrote. Please rate and tell me what you think.
- Date: 07/25/2009
- Tags: your diffrent exceedingly beautiful redofcolor
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Comments (3 Comments)
- ElectronicSounds - 07/29/2009
- its takes a creative, deep, compasionate soul to read this and understand. i very much admire this piece :]
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- ~Shadey Sam~ - 07/28/2009
- um..you could make an interesting story out of this.
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- Intrepid Indigo - 07/26/2009
- I guess this is a love-thing but to me I felt like the guy was just being rude and wondered why the girl spoke only in cliches.
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