Dawn in all her glory

• Artist: StNecro
• Description: written for some very special ladies.
  they brighten my life.
• Date: 07/23/2009
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She stood upon this hill,one day too long ago.
dressed, like any other day.
Eclipsing every flower in the fields below.

Her hair was damp, her smile was bright,
she was so perfect, in every way.
In a sad and lonely life, she was my light.

Comments

[ElectraShocked]

I don't really know what to make of the part "Eclipsing every flower..."?
It's really good, it would be better if you made it a tad bit longer though.



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