"The World Needs savin"

• Artist: rainbowprincess15
• Description: this is the chours part of a song i am writing i would like to know what you think of it please be honest i take in constructive critisism!!!
  
  the song is pretty much about whats going on in the world if i get enough hits i will post the whole song!!
• Date: 07/18/2009
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CHORUS:
Will i wake up in this place?
will i look and see your face?
will the world collide beneth us
will we both pray to jesus and say
that "the world needs savin today"

Comments

[mintyminty97]

it will be a hit!