- please tell me if you like my poem, well it is not my best i just thought of it a few seconds ago but please.... tell me and rate my poem. I hope you guys like it.
- by ichigo1508 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/15/2009 |
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- Title: Pain
- Artist: ichigo1508
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Description:
The pain won't stop,
My head and heart feel like they
Are going to break apart,
Someone out there notice me,
Help me, heal me,
Why do I feel this way?
Why is there so much pain?
The real life hurts, somebody save me,
Please I beg you,
The pain won't stop,
I am crying, can't you see?
I am crying tears of blood,
help me, help me be happy again,
Let me have a happy life, and let me smile once
Again. - Date: 07/15/2009
- Tags: pain
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Comments (2 Comments)
- gerbils4 - 01/03/2010
- I was gonna put you a star down for swapping the poem and description, but hey 5/5 from me ^^ no worries
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- Pony-com - 07/18/2009
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hehe, you swapped them. Description in poem box, poem in description box. Dont worry I ddid that like twice
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