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Lost in my mind, I see no way out.
The darknees all around me, closeing in.
It will not destroy me, for I have friends to help me.
The light shines I am free.
For now...
- by Exeno chan |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/08/2009 |
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- Title: In my mind waing for a friend.
- Artist: Exeno chan
- Description: This is just a short poem about, how lonely I feal.
- Date: 07/08/2009
- Tags: traped mind
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Kazue_Takakura - 06/12/2013
- Everyone can feel lonely sometimes, some more than others. But i think we can all agree we all have or had someone in our life out of that darkness smile
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- Slinkenhofer - 05/15/2012
- It's a little short, maybe think about expanding it? If feel like you could make quite the metaphor with this.
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- Goddess SpiritWolf - 11/28/2010
- Very touching and i felt the same way all through my life, friends are the light in a world of dark. ^_^ love the poem, it's short but has meaning. good job ^_^
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- Phobos Dominus - 07/25/2010
- very touching, Sounds alot like how I felt after I came out of the hospital
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- Xx_Love_Lost_Forever_xX - 06/20/2010
- I LOVE THIS POEM GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!
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- xXx Fr3sher_then_air xXx - 05/02/2010
- I love it! But for you boys think about the meaning to this peom it has depth. This really touched me 1000/10 biggrin
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- bluemoon122 - 01/13/2010
- me love it
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