The truth I hide inside

• Artist: Amarae Hoshisorano
• Description: This poem is about a person that wears a mask(no litterally) and is trying to get the person she loves to see that he can never see through her mask eventhough he says he does... I hope you all enjoy it and pls comment I always like to read what people got to say
• Date: 06/27/2009
• Tags: truth hide inside

You always see me smile
But you dont see my inner sadness
Cause you fail to see the mask I wear.

You see joy in my eyes
Even though I am drying inside
Cause you fail to see the mask I wear.

You say I am full of life
when I am dead inside
Cause you fail to see the mask I wear.

You say I am your guiding light
You cant see the darjness growing within
Cause you fail to see the mask I wear.

When will you realize the truth?
I am just a broken soul lost in life
But you will never see the thruth
Cause you failed to see the mask I wear.

Comments

[Gothique Jedi]

sorry to comment again but this is just my opinion. since on the last line your ending the poem. instead of using 'fail' why not use pasttense and put 'failed' . you can even put wear in past tence.(wore). i dont care about what u do with 'wear' but , me personally, if u do change 'fail' to 'failed' it would end the poem alittle bit better.

[Gothique Jedi]

this is really good. i do have a suggestion to change the title. since you do repeat 'Cause you fail to see the mask I wear'. why not title the poem 'Mask' or 'Mask I wear'. that just what i think. anyway 5/5

[xXx_iiCheeks_xXx]

hey i love dis!!! it sows alot of how i feel!

[sadcutie12390]

this is amazing. It reflects my life.

[Emmelodi100]

Wow.That is really true.I like it!