Left Out

• Artist: xxxCD7xxx
• Description: A free-verse(non rhyming)poem about being left out of Heaven because of what sexual orientation you are.
• Date: 06/21/2009
• Tags: left cold lonely outside heaven

Left out
"How does it feel?"
Lonely and cold
I'm different
That may be
But I'm a good person
Haven't I proved that to you?
No, because of who you date
So I like both genders
You told us to love one another
I'm following your rules
You left a loophole
And now I'm left out
Left out
Cold and lonely
The gates closed
In my face
I was left out
Of Heaven

Comments

[angelsupernova93]

So beautiful and so true, it really shows how people feel about Bi's, Gay's, and Lesbian's
Bravo keep writing

[evilangel121234]

BEAUTIFUL KEEP WRITING I WANNA READ ANOTHER ONE OF YOUR POEMS!!!! : )

[Jakemen357]

Shiroi no Kazahana probably doesn't understand that through pain and suffering you learn who you are and whats important to you so you can enjoy and cherish those things even more especially the things or people you love I know this doesn't have a lot to do with your poem; so your choices are your own no one makes you choose and no matter what others think of that choice even some higher power you made that choice so be proud of it and don't give yourself up to anyone but the one you truly love.

[KaonMurakumo]

I can relate to this completely. Now that I think of it, I've completely gone against my religion at this point, but I don't care. Just hope my family doesn't find out, so I can stay near her. And pay no attention to the previous comment! She doesn't know what she's talking about! This is really good, and keep it up!

[Shiroi no Kazahana]

What is with everyone writing only poems of pain, and sorow, and crap? Cheer up, people! GOD!!!