Reality

• Artist: ThisIsMyDeathbed_x
• Description: well in this one, i'm questioning reality and emotion. If you don't understand any of it , pm me and tell me, and i'll explain :)
  NOTE : Punctuation is there for a reason. the question marks on every second line are supposed to show that the narrator's thought of it all over and over again.
  oh, it starts out like 'the blues' by switchfoot, cuz that was my inspiration.
  enjoy and comment :)
  
  P.S - the girl behind the psycho poems is in the ref pic, so that's me! :D
• Date: 06/20/2009
• Tags: reality

READ DESCRIPTION FIRST PLEEEASE! xp
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Is this a new year
Or just another day?
Is this the new fear
That my dreams will fade away?
Is this the last chance
To grab who i desire?
Is this a romance
Is my heart just being a liar?

Is this the new song
Or just another tale?
Is pleasure life-long
Or just designed to fail?
Is this the switch
That changes dark to light?
Is that the glitch
That everyone wants to fight?

Is this a dream
Or a piece of shattered truth?
Is this a scream
That echoes from my youth?
Is this the right way
To reach where I belong?
Or should I just stay
In case the way is wrong?

Is this a fake,
That we all see today?
Is life a rake,
That’s forever clawing away?
In the world that we’re in,
With the emotion we conceal,
Is death a sin,
Or the only thing that’s real?

Comments

[ThisIsMyDeathbed_x]

aaaawwwwww!!!!!! melted heart! that's EVERYONE!

[Arc En Licorne]

whao thats really deep i LOOOOOVE IT!! 5/5 if i could rate it higher i would!! but ya kno i kinda cant so yea

[ThisIsMyDeathbed_x]

aaaw, thank you King of Trash smile Thank you all! I love you aaaaall! =D

[King of Trash]

I think this is my favorite out of all your poems...
reality? It's all a big lie.

[draco of the storm]

dude if i worked fore a componie id turn this into a new hot song right away you have a future i give you 5/5 but i want to give you a 5/10 i mean 10/10

[Reverie Sarvis]

Daaamn, that's deep. Definably a 5/5.

[faux_fur_rabbit]

0.o Omfg, I love it so much.
It's kind of sad, but it's still really amazing. ^^
5/5 Read my stuff?