swallowed by the sea

• Artist: W i c k e cl
• Description: something I wrote when i was really depressed, please take the time to read it :)
• Date: 06/11/2009
• Tags: heartbreak love

Answer me truly...,
Are you really this oblivious.?
That you cannot see the sorrow in my eyes ,
as i sit here and cry,
Or hear the pain in my voice ,
as i whisper your name?
I fear....
That your drifting away,
Leaving me alone,
to drift in this lonely sea.
Because I truly believe you are the one for me,
But obiviously you cannot see the pain your causing me,
There is no point is for me trying anymore,
It is too late now, for I have been swallowed by the sea.
I lost you forever,
But still you haunt me in my dreams.
causing me too lose sleep,
why must this be.....
I wish you would come back to me......... </3

- wickedtoxin

Comments

[sm00shed ba_Nana_s]

what a melancholy lyrik. I think it's very emotional, and that's what makes it good. However, I think that if you are going to make rhyming attempts, they should be good ones. Otherwise, just let the poem be free verse

[xXx_False Hopes_xXx]

that is a very good poem you wrote there.You should write some more.