The door has closed

• Artist: His_Crazy_Angel_1
• Description: Random Poem i wrote in 8th grade
• Date: 06/08/2009
• Tags: door closed

The door has closed
and my life has taken a turn

I feel lonely like
I should never belong

Felling sad everyday
and miserable all day long

No one understands
these feelings I have

Wishes gone
hopes vanish

as the door closes
and I disapear

Comments

[vv7722]

Pretty good, it could fit together better but i like the lyrics. 4/5

[BloodyLaughter]

I write poems from when I was younger. Though my dad beat me like a dirty rug I loved him till the day he died. I'm glad your poem was nice and touching.