War

• Artist: Killereria
• Description: I wrote this for English in 8th grade hope you all like it.
• Date: 06/07/2009
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I don't understand...
Why men fight
Why we have dictators
Why there is good and bad.
But most of all...
Why we fight for domination
Why we have rich and poor
Why war will never die
What I understand most is...
Why peace comes and leaves
Why we live
Why we unite
Why we are constantly at war.

Comments

[Killereria]

lol ty

[z4pper]

hmmm..... very iteresting things to think about..... but there isn't much rythm (haiku?). No ryhming either (haiku?). It comes from the heart and considering it's from an 8th grade consciousness I believe that earns a mercy star too. It's a debatable 3 or 4 (I'll give ya a 4 just cuz ur a friend)