broken heart parade

• Artist: Nami Kiasu
• Description: this is a short poem i wrote. for me, it has deep meaning. what does it mean to you? please comment if you are part of the broken heart parade (copyright). comment and rate, and give advice to the young aurthor/poet. (me)
• Date: 05/26/2009
• Tags: broken heart parade heartbreak namikiasu

Marching out of time
To the beat of my heart
Instead of the drums
But that’s how its done
In the broken heart parade.

Comments

[Nami Kiasu]

if i had to critque my own work, i'd give myself this advice- it has no rythem, and has an abrupt end. no flow, and its just sorta a bunch of words. but to me, it has a story behind it, so its special.

[WorIds]

i love it...i'll jion ur parade with u...my heart's been broken so many times that it can't be fixed anymore...