-
Descend into the melancholy of what once were great dreams
Now awkwardly silenced by reality, and we find that
Everything’s the same
Yet nothing’s what it seems to be
Smile and hold your breath as we approach the tunnel
Naive memories; hand in hand, it’s easy to fly
Just throw yourself at the ground
And miss
Dive; the deep end pulls us in through chlorine air
Interlocking hands and metal underwater
You’d be the “Best” to my “Friend” till the end
The charm bracelets don’t lie
The charm bracelets don’t lie
Golden wings throw light on frightened eyes
Like the glow of your skin drenched in the Sun’s goodbyes
The burning pain has numbed; the choice is clear
There isn’t one
Phone a friend, phone a friend
Can you hear me calling?
Phone a friend, phone a friend
Can you hear me?
- by Panic Pirate |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 05/21/2009 |
- Skip
- Title: Wave
- Artist: Panic Pirate
-
Description:
No fights, no tears; sometimes your "Best Friend" just fades away. After that, it took me a LOT longer to actually call someone my best friend out loud, although I know I have the best ones I could possibly ask for right now. Thanks guys :)
(comment away...)
- Date: 05/21/2009
- Tags: drown best friend fade
- Report Post
Comments (3 Comments)
- Panic Pirate - 05/30/2009
-
Thanks Sunafire and Behatz! biggrin
Yes, I was going for an innocent tone so I shall decipher that as a compliment (but I think you're insinuating.. inexperience, perhaps?)
But then again, I'm writing from Years 6 experiences so...
x - Report As Spam
- Behatzlacha-S - 05/30/2009
-
It's... innocent.
Decipher that as you will. wink - Report As Spam
- Sunafire - 05/21/2009
-
I haven't really been around gaia recently so I haven't had the chance to look at your new stuff xD
Anyway as far as spontaneous goes, this is brilliant. You're really talented Panic biggrin
Im a spontaneous writer too, I dont really go through my poems unless im writing them up for something, and the thing with spontaneous is that your poems start sounding the same.
You havnt had this happen yet, which is what makes yours brilliant biggrin - Report As Spam