Secrets...

• Artist: kimycanibal
• Description: a poem about a girl that couldnt be keept alive by love.
• Date: 05/21/2009
• Tags: secrets death water

She never knew a love so great
could lead her to a watery fate
alone she cried herself to sleep
she knew that she was in too deep

a leap of faith towards the water
a lonley crying sinking daughter
it took so long to lose her breath
invited to a watery death....

Comments

[Brostoss]

slightly morbid but still deep.
in the future try to not use the same words over again (water)