Paradise

• Artist: Malevolent Glare
• Description: I wrote this poem up when I was severely suicidal. At one time, this was my suicide note.
• Date: 05/10/2009
• Tags: paradise

I dream of a far off land...
With cerulean flowers galore and wolves running free...
But alas, this land isn't real.
It only exists in the the depths of my mind...
I can only see it...
Why am I the only one who can see it?
Even so...
This land comforts me in ways nothing else can.
I'm able to escape the abuse and for once, I am truly happy...
Despite the darkness in the corner, my body battered and bruised, I smile...
As I slowly fade away....and the land I thought was only in my imagination welcomes me....

Comments

[kisara666]

Henstly I love it 5/5 it''s beautifully calm, but at the same time it's sad...
I believe that all our paradise's after death is our own, we see everyone we know but they go the we dreamed life would let them go. And our grand garden would be the way we always dreamed in our untold fantasies, that is why no one sees it they way we do. So for me it would be a world of peace, no war, everyone understanding each other, and doing what we're supposed to do, garden our planet and destroying it.

[Miss Eviscerator]

excellent. this was very thought out. it almost brought a tear to my eye. well done =) 5/5