just die?

• Artist: Ms Make Me Smile
• Description: its hopefully my last ever writing effort. im trying to quit now but its kinda hard anyway its title has a question mark at the end because i really dont know i want to die but im a coward and scared of the future so tell me what you think please no mean comments thanks
• Date: 05/09/2009
• Tags: just

its fighting inside me
one side is saying
go die let go
the other is saying
no you cant your getting there
you cant end it now
i dont know what to believe
i want to believe in loss
i want to fight
ive done it too many times
please dont let me die
dont let me end it
dont let me die
why whats the point
whats the point in saving you
youve got nothing left to live for
so just quit
just die
end it before it hurts you more
you were never happy
so what makes you think you will be now
i no longer know
did i ever know at all
so here my answer
just die?

Comments

[Koneko Moved]

not really a poem.. more of thoughts that pull you as to what you should do.

the helpless one cries..
should they stay here or just die?
noone knows what path they'll go...
only the reflection in thier mirror will know.

[WereSquishy]

Trying to pull a T-Pac/or Kurt huh...

[Kisa8]

I'm with Kag, you should keep living, life gets better! Keep fighting and you will survive the pain, cheesy but true!

[kagwasha27]

AWWW thats sad and you shouldn't die. You should keep fighting for whatever it is your fighting for and you'll make through.