Sanctuary

• Artist: Nouun
• Description: A song I wrote while my last boyfriend was off at college. Most of my stuff doesn't rhyme, or will kind of rhyme, though it's normally unintentional, so if it does, it's just an added bonus. Enjoy!
• Date: 05/05/2009
• Tags: sanctuary

The stillness of the night has become our sanctuary
The breeze that blows through our hair
And the smell of the night
Makes this moment almost bittersweet

I wish you would never leave my side
Or go off some where that I won't be able
To touch you, or smell you, or feel your body so close to mine
Why must you go?

I dream of your warmth
Every time I lay down to rest
And it becomes so bittersweet
That I wish I didn't have to wake up
To find that you're gone

So just for tonight
Let's make it ours
And love like lovers do
In this, our sanctuary

Comments

[Nouun]

Yes. He's here right now, but we decided it'd be best to break-up since he's leaving again for another five years.
I believe "some where" can be two or one word.

[NebuChi3]

Shouldn't 'some where' be one word?

But anyway, long-distance relationships mostly turn out to be disasters.
Did you guys (already) break up because you were both too far away from each other?