War

• Artist: Kain-9
• Description: war is going on right now and i feel that it is just a waste of time and money to keep killing people for a fasult reason.
• Date: 04/14/2009
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War is a thing that man has made
A thing that takes people away
A thing of death and lose
War is not the way
War takes count less souls away
War spends our money ever day
War is what is going on now
We can’t live in peace they say
We need war every day
In our lives we war against things every day
But we will lose against those wars always the same way
But there is no joy in killing some one with a wife
No love on the blood bathe field
No peace of mind in the battle
No heart when you kill a man
No love in war as it commands
The blood of the love ones you fight for every day

Comments

[icefox5]

interesting. i'd give 4. Probably cuz i've seen someone write like this, that was really exceptionally good. it was really good. (both his and yours)

[Kain-9]

*slam into ground* i hate you Dev.

[Dev13666]

u r right about the war and stuff so i'll give u a 5 but i have this to say. SIT! (evil lol)

[Shadow_H3arts]

nice poem.and 4 all u people who hate dis poem,its true.how about the civil war?World war 2?and this is true.war is happening right now and might never end.so dont make fun of it just cuz its boring.

[Kain-9]

it is true! don't say its not cause u must be blind to not see what this stupid has brong.