Just a Minute

• Artist: emoly01
• Description: um... just something i wrote for no reason beside being bored and needing to express myself
• Date: 04/12/2009
• Tags: disappeared

He was there, just a minute ago
We were together, just a minute ago
He held me, just a minute ago
What happened?
Where did he go?

He stands in front of me
We smile
We kiss
We love each other
He disappears
Or do I?

I left him
I'm gone
He cries
I cry

Nothing can prove it:
We just are
We are alone;
I am gone.
So is he.

I wait
He waits
I go
He waits
I arrive
Still he waits

Just a minute
Then I'm there
Then we're together:
Happy- in just a minute

Comments

[myjames]

Well, it is very good for a second shot. I see you used some advice. It seems a bit forced compared to the last one. The first one was best, I think. It is very cute, though.

[Dani_me2]

cute!!

[Bluecandescent]

aww thats really cute XD

[zero1039]

A bit brief, but well written, considering I can connect. *wink wink*