A Cure To A Broken Heart

• Artist: dilema08
• Description: this is a very short poem showing sometime things happen for ur own good
  its hard to realize but its true
• Date: 04/06/2009
• Tags: cure

rolleyes love is pure
it like a cure

ur heart is broken
they make it as a token
u fell apart
in ur heart

now u noe its for ur good burning_eyes

Comments

[mexicantacos2003]

i wish you could expand on your first simile, on the "token" comparison, and the "broken heart" cliche to be removed; also, spell check. There are some great spell checkers online