Does he care? (2)

• Artist: maydaymouse
• Description: Here's the 2nd version and again rate, comment and tell me what you think.
• Date: 03/30/2009
• Tags: care

He loves me, He loves me not
Would I feel the same?
Would I not?
Would I feel the same
If he were held were held
By another?
Probably not.
Would he care
If I were held by another?
Probably not.
So why do I care if
The love we once shared
Is no longer there?

Comments

[Ultima011]

I've said once and I'll keep saying it until arthritis prevents me from typing: Great poem and keep up the good work. You write better than most of my friends who do poetry.

[SakuraHaruno5121]

Cool! 5/5 =)

[Pro Amy Shiko1991]

I can relate to that along with at LEAST 80% girls and women out there. Great job. 5/5

[peacekitten65]

That was great!
I think it's a story that's all too familiar to girls everwhere.