Dream Weaver

• Artist: Brennan096
• Description: Just a poem a wrote when i was sitting under the stars.
• Date: 03/27/2009
• Tags: dream weaver

As I look up at the twilight
And look at the stars so bright,
I wonder if one day I'll take flight,
To the stars and above
For ever more I will love.

Comments

[cooll666725]

I'd look to making poems that a little longer personally. Maybe not too long but not this short either. Very good rhythm, though.

[Mythica_16]

Not bad