Life Blood

• Artist: kylee-nightrunner
• Description: its something i came up with in poetry class (major wast of time) and i liked it alot so here it is yo! hope you like it as much as i do
• Date: 03/18/2009
• Tags: life blood

Flowing through my soul

Pounding in my ears

its the beating of my heart

killing all my fears

racing through my veins

keeping me togther

the pounding pulse of the heart

staning my young mind, the marks last forever

its my shoulder to on

my life blood

it keeps me alive

holding back the torrential flood

Comments

[GAlA Site Assistant 60]

very interesting... hmm 5/5 stars

[scitama]

Sounds nice, but maybe the meter is off a bit. You can rhyme for sure, and have potential! biggrin