(haiku) birdy fly home

• Artist: marshall11
• Description: this is a haiku i wrote at a school for a project for those who doesnt know what a haiku is its a poem that does not ryme its mostly about nature and the first line has 5 syllables the next line 7 syllables and the last 5 syllables
• Date: 03/16/2009
• Tags: haiku

the bird was graceful
as it took flight off the ground
to return to home

Comments

[290DarkStars]

MAN! HAIKUS ARE HARD! I tried doing one myself once.... Great job, man! Keep on Keepin' on!

[Purlicue]

Umm,I've never heard of a Haiku but all i know is that you put 'to' twice on the last line.
1/5 :l