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the shadows come
to reap their blight
they wake me up
an endless night
it never comes
tomorrow morn
my daily life
is here but torn
but you with me
we'll have our ways
and see the light
of future days
- by Adumbral_Abyss |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 03/12/2009 |
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- Title: Night
- Artist: Adumbral_Abyss
- Description: A poem inspired by one of my friends who helped me through some tough times... It's actually my favorite poem (that I wrote ^^). Please Comment!
- Date: 03/12/2009
- Tags: night endless light redemption shadows
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Adumbral_Abyss - 03/15/2009
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It started out as "to start the fight," but I agree, like this version better ^^
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- Gray_Card327 - 03/13/2009
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I love the second line. "to reap their blight"
:3
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- Adumbral_Abyss - 03/13/2009
- Thanks so much! I don't really like writing long poems, because then I won't let them end... ^^
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- xJeriROCKSx - 03/13/2009
- awww it soo cute.... but it would be better if its longer... (plz comment to my stuff XD) 4/5
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- Adumbral_Abyss - 03/13/2009
- Please, don't be shy! Comment!
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