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CRIMSON TEARS
For you i cry these tears of crimson
For this undying passion
This longing for your loving heart
These tears flow like a stream
With the color of roses
The time i spent with you feel like a endless dream
A dream i can't seem to wake up from
For you i cry,i love,i die for
For that i wish for eternal love
- by darkstarwish |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 03/10/2009 |
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- Title: CRIMSON TEARS
- Artist: darkstarwish
- Description: this poem was 1 of my top bests it has won a award
- Date: 03/10/2009
- Tags: crimson tears darkstarwish
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Comments (3 Comments)
- SilvertongueSagittarius - 08/29/2009
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In what universe does this deserve an award?
2/5 - Report As Spam
- Kagurome - 03/11/2009
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Very very meaningful. 5/5....
*sniff* keep up the good work! - Report As Spam
- Vivian Arcane - 03/10/2009
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I find it very meaningful. Though it is free verse you did not make it sloppy by doing so. In fact the free verse is what gave it character and meaning. If it won an award then it was well deserving of one. I commend you on your work and hope you keep up with your writing.
~Vivi~ - Report As Spam
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