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Guarding the route with his patrol
neively unaware,
of metal cutting through the wind
the bombs were nearly there.
The ground rumbled as tanks exploded
his buddy cried in pain;
he slung him over his shoulder fast
and ran through the shrapnel rain.
Behind a damaged tank he lay
his buddy on the ground;
where he didn't blink, move
or even make a sound.
He screamed for a medic,
though in truth he knew
his buddy had died
there was nothing he could do.
Everything grew quiet,
and the only thing he could hear
was his screams and sobs
as he quaked with fear.
He cried through the night
and awoke with a start.
He came to a conclusion;
he must play his part.
He stood up slowy
to face the misty glow
of his very worst nightmare;
a brother's blood on snow.
He looked out over the bodies
and then faced away
for he'd pulled his gun out
in quiet dismay.
He carefully relaxed himself
for his hand was in a fist
as he put the pistol to his head
and fell into the mist.
- by mlover4evr |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 03/03/2009 |
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- Title: Red Mist
- Artist: mlover4evr
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Description:
k, i was bored. hope u likey.
P.S. if u don't like suicide ones, dont read this then. ty ppl
TTFN~ - Date: 03/03/2009
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Rook219 - 03/19/2009
- eh heh -_-' I'm the one with the typo *writing should take
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- Rook219 - 03/19/2009
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Nice job! In a couple minutes is how long wi=riting should be =P That's my view at least. It's the only way you can get something to be as purely from the heart as possible.
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- mlover4evr - 03/10/2009
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thanx!
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- Marionette_Mentation - 03/04/2009
- for a few minutes this is very good. comment back plz
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- mlover4evr - 03/03/2009
- feel free 2 comment. PS sry its long. i was bored, i literally wrote this about 2 min ago. sry if it dosent " flow right " diff ppl have diff opinions, so... yeah. i h8 it when ppl just say "typos!" or "grammatical errors!" and thats all they leave. i would like constructive criticism plz, not a spell check. thanks 4 readin~
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