Reality's Nightmare

• Artist: Indecisive Indigo
• Description: I can't remember why I wrote this... I think I was bored in piano class <_>'...
• Date: 02/22/2009
• Tags: realitysnightmare

There is a world so, dark..so gray.
It's like walking through hell everyday.

The violence so breath taking...and the screams...
It sounds as unreal as a dream.

All you an feel is emptyness...and guilt..
For not being able to feel your own heart break!
Here, life is measured by the number of breaths you take.

By every breath, your soul fades into the dark and gray.
Your mind also begans to slip away...

You realize there is no escape.
Everything forms into a nightmarish shape.

I frown at the thought that this world is to real to be in my mind..
I only feel shame that this is the world I leave behind..

Comments

[MinteaPierrot]

This is very well written. Not saying anything but poetry doesn't have to rhyme. I think you could've length it out a little and add a little more detail. Other than that is was very good.