Gambling Poem

• Artist: Sunafire
• Description: A small poem (Written in the Haiku format, 5,7,5)* I wrote when playing on the Gaia Slot Machines.
  Self explanitory really :)
  
  * = Edited because I ignorantly called it a Haiku :)
• Date: 02/22/2009
• Tags: gambling haiku slots gaia luck

Another token in,
Come on, just one more halo,
Damn you, slot machine.

Comments

[Sunafire]

Hmm I just assumed it was the formation of syllables, 5,7,5 that made a haiku! My bad!
Damn english schools razz

[-xo--Ali--ox-]

Haiku is about earth. x3

[jgirl39]

It's not a haiku if it's not about nature - there's another word for that. Also, the centering is annoying. Still, those are both really minor things. It's good, especially the last line.