- smile your heart is like a peice of candy people might break it or try to take it.my heart is torn its like a new born it cries until it dies you try to fix it but you just get it twisted but some people are here to fix it.love is until it dies you love a person then the love another person then it goes on on on until its long gone.hope u like it dont say anthing if you dont have anything good to say dont say anything plz. biggrin
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- | Submitted on 02/15/2009 |
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- Title: heart and love
- Artist: Fancy dd123
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- Date: 02/15/2009
- Tags: heartandlove
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- Cottoncandyocbra3 - 02/21/2009
- Publish this? I want to see the drunk that publishes this. Your request for "say something nice" is denied. I will give my honest opinion. This poem is uncreative, unimaginative, simple, boring, plain, cliche, and weak. It has no set tone or feel. I think you need to do a lot of work on it.
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- brandifbby - 02/21/2009
- i loveee itttttt
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- Tetarti - 02/20/2009
- Publish it? She can't even get someone to s**t on that.
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- xoxoxdemon_angelxoxo - 02/16/2009
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wow that's really good!!!!!!!!! you should publish that lolz!!!!!!! 5/5!^.^
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