It Hurts

• Artist: aixoria
• Description: Ok, this is the second version of a poem I wrote. If you'd like to see the original, PM me or leave a comment here or my profile. (: I prefer commenting cause its awesomer. [: But I really don't care. I will post it if you want, but Imma post the three entries that I can today and that's not gunna be one of them, So you'll have to wait until at least tomorrow. Sorry guys (;
  Lol. Please rate and comment my other stuff please!! If you read this. Haha (;
  Hope you likeeeee.
• Date: 02/15/2009
• Tags: hurts pain crash broken

As i walk down the street
I'm tryin to think
But i cant breathe
The thought of you
Its killing me
Deep inside i know
I have to let you go
I have my head between my knees
But i really cant believe
That you actually did this to me
Theres alot of chances ive taken
Sometimes you should think
Cause its my heart youre breakin
Im tryin to hold on
Cause there's no where left to run
Think about the choices your makin
All the tears you think I'm fakin
Im gunna climb that mountain
And never look down
Sometimes I run away
From the ones I love
I wish I could stay
But it hurts so much
To watch you fade
And I heard you cry
You wanted to talk
But you're the one who lied
And I found out
You're just the one
The one who tried
I knew the signs
But I denied
I wanted you
And only you
Then I crashed
I heard you laugh
You never cared
You never would
You faked it
What a jerk!
It hurts to know
That the one I loved the most
Is tearing us apart
He never wanted me
He played with my feelings
Like I was his enemy
And now I know
That this was all my fault...

Comments

[Twilight Starr Fairy]

I rate this poem 4/5 :]
I think maybee it needs more, but again u said that this isnt the full version.
But its REELY good :]

[angelic_15_girl]

wow it's really great tnx for helping me out i wish i can be as good as you someday well gotta edit mine bye ....♥

[Twilight Starr Fairy]

This ones supenseful. This should be in a movie or something.
Like the girl is saying this in her head as shes walking down the street :] lol/

and yes commenting is awesomerr. I like comparing poems to songs.
This one compares to "aplogize" by Timbaland/