My Identity

• Artist: coraggioso
• Description: Nobody wants to cuddle with me
  I am a loner in the sandy street
  Tall, silent, sustaining
  I am a cactus
  Pretty to see
  But poisonous to touch
  Living in stifling heat
  Green as green can be
  In the sandy smothering sultriness
  The prettiness of my bloom
  People come to see
  Animals come to live in me
  But only certain personalities
  Can see the good in me
  Enduring in the South
  Nothing gets to me
  Bottling up sensitivity
  Like first rains water
  I can see the good
  In the hot weathers heat
  
• Date: 02/10/2009
• Tags: cactus identity

It was an English project I'd thought I'd post on here, give it a try ^.^
The metaphor in it is pretty basic so I hope you like

Comments

[coraggioso]

lol.... wow
stupid mistake.....
how embarrassing......
*blush*

[Chrono Crow]

XD You've got it backwards. The poem is supposed to go in that blue box up there, and the "It was an English project ..." is supposed to be in the Description box. You get points off for that. D: But I like the poem.