shards in the dark

• Artist: ABluejay
• Description: It's just one of those depressive days
• Date: 02/09/2009
• Tags: shards dark

please close those blinds today
I don't want to embrace those rays
there's no point in getting up
just to try to catch the bus
and go to school with unopened eyes
unwilling to hear those ******** lies
that people keep trying to put in my head
continously until I'm dead
and I... don't want to feel
the glass shards can help me heal
but I know thats not the way
a phony act and a useless charade
I grasp a bottle in my hand
and thow it into the wall and there it smash
and those shards, how they fall
and land on the floor, one and all
those falling shards
as they rain in the dark
It's day and the sun is out
But I'm in my room lost in the dark
confined in this space and my mind
I don't want to be burdened by daily life
I curl up unwilling to embrace
my irrelevant role in the human race

Comments

[Kite_the_Knight_of_Night]

it was very good, and had a nice rythm and flow to it. the last line 'irrelevant role in the human race' everyone is here for a reason, cheesy i guess, but true. life is just the journey to finding that reason.

[290DarkStars]

its verry artistic, but I advise stanzas and to talk more about the prime of the subject.