Tears

• Artist: Niamh_of_Sevenwaters
• Description: i wrote this poem when i was having a really bad day...and it made it seem better..please rate and comment
• Date: 02/01/2009
• Tags: tears

It falls down my cheek
Slowly
Silently
A pearl of perfect silver
It escapes my walls
Of defense
And pours down
Once one falls
More must fall
I wish there was someone
To stop my tears
To comfort me
To tell me it’s going to be okay
So no more tears will fall

Comments

[roboslacker]

I think you don't need "Of defense" but otherwise pretty great.

[ObsessiveSiriusFanGirl]

aww this captures loneliness so perfectly. Good that it made you feel better=]

[hellobeautiful793]

we all wish there was that someone for us
nice poem!