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The snow is a shining sheet of white paper put down on a desk
The snow shines like a happy child frolicking in the flowers
The snow has many powers such as to overjoy children when they see its smiling face
The snow is bright and happy and comes overnight without a fright
The snow is lovely and is that happy place that you wish for in tough times
- by FrankieGibson |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/30/2009 |
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- Title: The Snow
- Artist: FrankieGibson
- Description: I hope you like it im just a blossoming poet i think this will help me to write songs
- Date: 01/30/2009
- Tags: snow
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Fo-eights Beach Fo-eights - 02/01/2009
- Listen to Kibroth, just not about the diction. Please use correct diction it just doesn't need to be conventional. He still used correct diction in his lines.
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- Kibroth - 01/31/2009
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Don't give up writing, practice is very important to producing good poetry/lyrics.
Keep in mind that, unlike pro's, you don't have to write full sentences (or even use correct diction!).
"Snow, shining pristine white
sheet upon desk of unseen earth beneath"
See?
Keep it up!
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