A Burden to Infinite

• Artist: A Hidden Darkened Angel
• Description: A poem i wrote inspired by my friend jenns lyrics "Her bloody tears she cried stained her sorrow face" and so i twisted it and put it in my first and second lines. This poem describes a girl who is going into a state of anguish and her own sub-concious hell.
• Date: 01/23/2009
• Tags: burden infinite death life girl

She shed crimson tears of blood,
While drowning in her sorrow.
Lost in the abyss of hell.
Hope deteriorates,
Life fades away,
Her spirit suffered eternal depression.
Suicidal images invade her thoughts,
Hastely she was consumed by rage, horror, confusion.
As nightfall arrived,
Hell froze over.
The little girl withered away.
Her spirit wanders, still wailing,
Urging to see sunlight once more,
Unfortunately trapped in forever darkness...

Comments

[awesomecacy]

Depressing, expecially when you see how many dark and depressing poems are out there...
I don't like the concept really, because that's me, but I do like the writing and stuff - so 5/5.

[The_Last_Spartan77]

OMG I LOVED IT!!!!!!! this is so awesome i can feel the tone!!