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No matter what I do,
my room seems like a stampede has come through.
A cluster of turn ripped up clothes,
one of my sister's dolls wwith no nose.
My dad said my room is disagreeable,
my mom said my room is unspeakable.
But yes I confess,
that my room is a mess.
- by leesh alicia |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/19/2009 |
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- Title: my room is a mess!
- Artist: leesh alicia
- Description: i had to present this to my class...... my teacher loved it. it took my three days.but hey prefection takes time!
- Date: 01/19/2009
- Tags: room mess
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- ruroukenluver13 - 03/24/2009
- luvin it i would also appreciate ur vote on mine just search my username!! ^__^
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- Sparkly Tits - 01/23/2009
- read mine?
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- steamyhappygrunny - 01/21/2009
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hhahah lol i lik it maybe if u have time try making it longer ^^ oh if u dont mind could u read my poem too? ={ plzz i really need ur vote...so heres the link..
http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/poetry-and-lyrics/vote/?entry_id=101039111#title - Report As Spam
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