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You and I we're same
You smile at me
I smile at you
you were my friend
And I was your friend
You tell me everything
I was beside you always listening
But at this point
We aren't same anymore
You like someone
And it hurts
But no cry one knows it
If you need someone to love/like you secretly
I'm always right beside you
Always hoping and always waiting for you to come back again someday....
- by _rytguy4me_replay_ |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/17/2009 |
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- Title: You And Me
- Artist: _rytguy4me_replay_
- Description: i'm not stupid to know that u r gone.....
- Date: 01/17/2009
- Tags: youandme
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Comments (2 Comments)
- MumblingNapoleon - 06/28/2009
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What, did you copy this out from where you scrawled it across her 6th grade science notebook?
Gimme some emotion man, seriously. You sound like you're 12. and even if you are, that's not the point. You can do better than this.
So get that freakin' smiley face out of your poem. Are you sad about this subject? Good. Do you take this subject seriously? Then get that crying emote out of this peice of literature, and describe your emotion, not your situation. - Report As Spam
- Phinagin2000 - 01/19/2009
- it would be a 4/5 but because i'm going through the same thing so u get me 5/5 wink
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