To My Father.

• Artist: xxxg4ng5ta_daxtonxxx
• Description: I think the statement in this poem is clear. This really is how I feel, but it is not something I like to talk about or will talk about. So please don't bother asking me.
• Date: 01/11/2009
• Tags: father

How many times will you say "I'm sorry." until you won't be?
How many times will I believe you?
How many times will you say "It was all just because of bad choices." until you don't care what choices were made?
How many times will I believe you?
How many times will you say "It won't ever happen again." until you want it to happen all the time?
How many times will I believe you?
How many times will you say "I love you." until it's just something you say that doesn't mean anything at all?
How many times will I believe you?
How many times will you say "I want to be a bigger part in your life." until you just say it so I'll forgive you and you can feel better?
How many times will I believe you?
How much longer will I love you?
Not any longer I'm done, I'm done with you.

Comments

[SilvertongueSagittarius]

What is it about Gaia that attracts people with daddy issues? (Myself included, lol) We'll, I love the poem until the "I love you" part. Find something better to say after it. And try to make a better ending. The last line is a bit too blatent. 3/5

[katiecat808]

great poem.

[ii Tiffy Bear ii]

Deep lil sis. Your really good at expressing how you feel keep it up X)